Éifeacht na Lúibíní (The Effect of the Brackets)

• Tá éifeacht thábhachtach ag lúibíní sa dán, go háirithe sa teideal- 'Mo ghrá-sa (idir lúibíní)'.
  • The brackets have an important effect in the poem, particularly in the title 'Mo ghrá-sa (idir lúibíní)'.
• Tá teideal an dáin cliste agus suimiúil.
  • The poem's title is clever and interesting.
• Dar liom, léiríonn na lúibíní dúinn go mbeidh an dán seo difriúil ó dánta grá eile.
  • According to me, the brackets show that this poem will be different from other love poems.

• Nuair a léimid an chéad pháirt den teideal , 'Mo Ghrá-sa', is cosúil gur dán grá traidisiúnta atá ann.
  • When we read the first part of the title, 'Mo Ghrá-sa', it seems like a traditional love poem.
• Ach, nuair a léimid an dara páirt den teideal, '(idir lúibíní), tuigimid go bhfuil rud éigean speisialta faoin dán seo.
  • But, when we read the second part of the title, '(idir lúibíní), we understand that there is something special about this poem.
• Mar sin, i mo thuairim, léiríonn na lúibíní dúinn nach dán grá traidisiúnta é an dán seo.
  • And so, in my opinion, the brackets show us that this poem is not a traditional love poem.

• Cuireann na lúibíní le greann agus éadroime an dáin.

  • The brackets add to the humour and lightness of the poem.

• Mar shampla, cruthaíonn an file pictiúr greannmhar, ach dorcha, leis na lúibíní; '(nuair a bheidh sé ocht dtroigh síos)'

  • For example, the poet creates a funny, but dark, picture with the brackets.

• Samhlaíonn an file a leannán, curtha san uaigh agus é marbh. Cinnte, is pictiúr gruama é seo, ach toisc go bhfuil na lúibíní ann, cruthaíodh atmaisféar níos spraioúla.

  • The poet imagines her love, dead and put in the coffin. Certainly, this is a gloomy picture, but as the brackets are there, a more amusing atmosphere is created.

• Is léir nach bhfuil an file lán dáiríre- tá sí ag magadh agus ag pleidhcíocht.

  • It is clear that the poet is not serious-she is mocking and messing.

• Ó thús go deireadh, úsáideann an file na lúibíní chun a thaispeaint dúinn cé go bhfuil grá aici dá fear, tuigeann sí nach bhfuil a gra foirfe.

  • From beginning to end, the poet uses the brackets to show us that even though she has love for her man, she understands that her love is not perfect.

• Leis na lúibíní, tá an file ag cáineadh an bhéim a chuirimid ar thréithe fisiciúla sa lá atá inniu.
  • With the brackets, the poet is criticising the emphasis that we put on physical traits today.